no-one to talk to
nowhere to go
i carry my hurt
where it cannot show
isolation awaits
as the light falls away
alone yet in company
aware but in pain
a mistake made in coming
realized too late
trouble then in coping
will i find a way?
no-one to talk to nowhere to go i carry my hurt where it cannot show isolation awaits as the light falls away alone yet in company aware but in pain a mistake made in coming realized too late trouble then in coping will i find a way? |
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being somewhere you never wanted to be, and feeling trapped can be a real burden...
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 thanks! and thanks a Lot for adding it to your
 ! it was cathartic getting it out. Jess -- PeopLe are Like stained-gLass windows. They sparkLe and shine when the sun is out; but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is reveaLed onLy if there is a Light inside.-ELisabeth kubLer-ross FAQ510!!!  Not all who wander are lost, Chinaroses. Even if your compass is broken and a tiger has eaten your map you are still traveling steadily ~somewhere~. Keep going!
 -- "Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence." - Carl Sagan  I love the writing its beautiful and so true.
-- I'm nothing special but I'll always be here.  beautifully written. personally I like it (:
keep up the writing, it's your strong point. I can't wait until you come back.. -- Hope dangles on a string like slow spinning redemption. THankyou!
 Jess -- PeopLe are Like stained-gLass windows. They sparkLe and shine when the sun is out; but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is reveaLed onLy if there is a Light inside.-ELisabeth kubLer-ross FAQ510!!! Thanks for that!
I Love you way you describe things, it makes me smiLe! Jess -- PeopLe are Like stained-gLass windows. They sparkLe and shine when the sun is out; but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is reveaLed onLy if there is a Light inside.-ELisabeth kubLer-ross FAQ510!!! Glad to cheer
 -- "Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence." - Carl Sagan  Jess -- PeopLe are Like stained-gLass windows. They sparkLe and shine when the sun is out; but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is reveaLed onLy if there is a Light inside.-ELisabeth kubLer-ross FAQ510!!!  -- "Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence." - Carl Sagan |
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